Seaborne Empire

My brutally honest review after reading all the published chapter Firstly the writing and story development is not bad however they are some issues with clarity as Junior a crown prince was getting stood up by a regular maid since the novel hadn't reviewed anything about the maids background I am assuming its just a regular maid who somehow  had more authority than the protagonist suppossed sister and had the status to think about talking to a prince with a tone of an adult lecturing a naughty child mannerSecondly there are quite a number of cring shit which could potentially cause readers to stop following your bookThirdly the encounter between Junior and his sister especially how they made up was quite forced and heavily unrealistic saying some words like I love you at the end, from what I understand he had no place to say that even tho he wasn't actually the one who had treated her badly, it was even more absurd as the maid didn't feel something wrong as the protagonist who suddenly had a change of heart starts calling out strong words like i love you also dont get started on the latest chapter the protagonist literally said he loved someone he just met and Helen got jealous about that ? Helen didn't even seem to be in love with the protagonist before that and to add Junior was a total jerk so unless she had special preferences that was just forced in other to have her as a potential harem memberNevertheless it wasn't actually as bad as I expected and managed to keep me interested at least until the last chapter so Ill rate it a 4.0

Awesome book, author. keep it up.I'm going to support your book no matter what.

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You stopped at the door and took a deep breathe feeling less brave than before. You just want to see how he's doing, that's all. You quietly open the door trying not to scare him but stop as you saw the state he was in. His hair was a mess with thousands of split ends. His face was pale like he hadn't been eating just as you expected and his lips were dry. All together he looked drained. Sadness filled your heart as the man you loved looked so stressed and tired.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

What am I doing here? If there's no special or interesting stuff around here. Roaming around the temple I recognize some stuff like circle mirror glass in a wall, a red fruit on the leaves of foliage, and well curved Corinthian-like columns.

The energy within the Monster Core in Sasuke's hand also fiercely dropped, forming a stream of energy visible to the naked eye which flowed into Sasuke's body.

It was eleven thirty-nine when the answer finally came to him. The plan was, if not perfect, then workable. He'd figured it all out. Who to call, how to call them, and how to get the money to them. But first he had to test it. He wasn't going to take chances with Nunnally.